FMP illustration body language

After reading and using the informative pieces of information of 'The definitive book of body language'  a took one of the photos i had taken of random people on the street and drew illustrations after i did that i wrote the descriptions of the people. i was influenced by Dorthy Iannane she expressed her feminist view through illustrations that formed a story board.  In one illustration i had drew it in black pen and in another i used blue water colour, it made the piece united and emphasized parts which showed how they connected. what didn't work was the presentation in my sketch book as the writing covered part of the drawing. If i had the time i would have developed the illustrations a bit more and experimented with different colors and compositions. From these two drawing i hope to carry these to the end as i enjoyed and felt that these represented body language as well as effective. i was surprised by the response of the drawings i wasn't sure f they would come across as well as i hoped but i was proved wrong. In the next stage im planning to take ip the style of Richard Hamiltion work.